Danii's Reviews > Forgive My Fins

I was not a very big fan of this book.
I felt like the main character was childish, immature, and just whiney. She was shallow and full headed, even when we could see that she was being an idiot. Talk about a spoiled princess!
The first problem I had with this book was that Lily was so obsessed with a guy, who she had barely talked to, and when she did he sounded either stoned or just plain braindead. How in the hell could you ever like that or think he would be suitable to run the mermaid world?! He could barely even talk without sounding like an idiot.
Second thing is that she kept pushing Quince away when she was obviously developing feelings for him, all because she somehow thinks she can get Brody, the absolute idiot I mentioned above. She just could not accept the fact, even when he was showing her how much he liked her, and in my opinion she sure as hell didn't deserve that affection from him.
Third thing was the tests. Where the hell did those even come from?! I feel like the author ran out of ideas and was like "Oh, I see this in books a lot, yes this is a great idea" when in reality it was stupid in this storyline. If you can't think of something that actually fits the storyline, then just stop writing it.
Fourth and final thing that I hated about this was that at the end, she decides that she loves Quince, after the bond is already broken, and ruins her dads goals of her becoming the queen. Shes known this since birth, and now she screws it all up because she was being shallow and just had to have the bond broken. And now her father has to find someone else to be heir, train them, and the line royal line won't be in their family anymore. GREAT JOB LILY YOU DUMB BITCH. God, and she thinks Doe is bad, when the rest of us think shes the worst.
Anyways, rant over. I will not be continuing this series ever. Sorry.