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Latest comment: 13 years ago by BarkingFish in topic Review of revision 1258625 [Passed]

Review of revision 1258574 [Failed]

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Latest comment: 13 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Revision 1258574 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 16:53, 13 July 2011 (UTC).Reply

  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Passed
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • NPOV: Not ready: purple prose — "dramatic blow", "immense pressure"; "media empire" (that one's mostly used by politicians, which should be a clue); "tycoon"
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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Revision 1258574 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 16:53, 13 July 2011 (UTC).Reply
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Passed
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • NPOV: Not ready: purple prose — "dramatic blow", "immense pressure"; "media empire" (that one's mostly used by politicians, which should be a clue); "tycoon"
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer: None added.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1258625 [Passed]

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Latest comment: 13 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Revision 1258625 of this article has been reviewed by BarkingFish (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:08, 13 July 2011 (UTC).Reply

Comments by reviewer: Reviewing the previous fail, I can see that the bias has been stripped, as has the prose, the work is looking good, the information is verifiable from provided sources, and it's a good clean article. Published (unlike the News of the World :) )

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1258625 of this article has been reviewed by BarkingFish (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:08, 13 July 2011 (UTC).Reply

Comments by reviewer: Reviewing the previous fail, I can see that the bias has been stripped, as has the prose, the work is looking good, the information is verifiable from provided sources, and it's a good clean article. Published (unlike the News of the World :) )

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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